Sam and MaddiJanes mom worked very hard to make a good living. Sam and MaddiJane were sitting on the couch watching their favorite t.v show when they heard something outside.
" Did you hear that?" Sam said as he walked to the window.
"Calm down, its just mom complaining about her old car again." MaddiJane answered. MaddiJane and Sams mom has been complaining about her car ever since they got a flat tire while driving to the beach.
"We should help her, I mean, she always complains about her car and she always tries her hardest to make us happy".
"That's a good idea! We should repaint her car so it would look even better!" MaddiJane said so proudly.
"Well she left for work so lets go!" The two kids left to the garage to get the paint.
"What color? Blue?" Suggested Sam. MaddiJane agreed and the two siblings worked on painting the car. They worked hard hours in the noon sun when Maddie pointed out something.
"S-S-Sam? Why is half the car purple? Maddi discovered
"What do you mean?" Sam looked at the car from Maddis point of view and his face went white. He automatically looked at the paint and realized that the horrible surprised was his fault.
" We can fix it, all we have to do is paint over the purple with blue." Sam suggested, hoping Maddi would agree.
"Not in ten seconds we can't".
"Why in ten?"
"Because mom is coming down the street right now!" Maddi yelled in a panic.
"It's ok, the car isn't that big." Sam said confidently.
"Sam! Its a HUGE can YOU-" Maddi and Sam realized it was to late.
"Surpri- What happened to my car?" Maddi and Sam's mom asked.
Maddi tried to explain.
"We just felt bad so we wanted to help. But then everything went all wrong.
"Come here you two." Mom said calmly
"I appreciate what you two did but I came home early because somebody was coming to fix the car for me. Maddi and Sam's mouth dropped.
"Why don't we go out to eat for all your hard work." Maddie and Sam's mom asked.
"Now that's a good idea." Sam said happily. The happy family left at sunset and was enjoying their evening together. All was well.
Nice post,Elena! It was a really good story. However, you could work on capitalizing. You should also fix a few grammar errors. I am pretty sure that Maddi Jane is two seperate words. Overall, great job!
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