Reflection

I loved the persuasive commercial!!!! Its was fun and exciting!!!! I like my perice  because there's dogs in it, it's weird, and its special. I feel I am good at editing, acting, and video taping. Some areas I could improve on is expression, vocabulary, and being more serious. Persuasive essay writing techniques and strategies I'd like to try next time are band wagin, counterargument, and bringing more people. The part of the writing process I enjoyed most is the script because it was easy, we got to make it our own, and we made a video out of it. My goals for next time is to put more dialoge, less narrorating, and use more persuasive techniques.  Three things I learned about myself throughout this project are we could write a poem, we arfe creative, and we could edit. Readers will see my mentors authors writing craft in my essay when i read the sections are about the poem, the claims, and persuasive techniques. Overral, I really enjoyed it!!