Thursday, March 10, 2011
Commercial
Hello!!!! My name is Elena Elias and i would like you to put our commercial on t.v. Now i am not demanding you to put our commercial on t.v. I understand that you have alot of people begging for an opportunity to be on t.v, but our commercial will not be one to regret, or forget. Our commercial that we want to be put on t.v is called, ReknUggs. ReknUggs is a commercial about a movie coming out in theaters but wil be out on dvd first to catch the people's eye. This commercial will show the main idea and clips for the fantasy/fiction movie. Thus, leaving it a mystery for the audience. This will catch their attention. This movie isn't just an old movie, it's a movie for all ages of kids to enjoy and watch. When was the last time you sat down and watched a great movie with your family. This movie will bring your family together and have a great time at the same time. This trailer is about a horrible ogre who falls in love with a beautiful princess who is cursed. The curse can only be broken wiht a true loves kiss. But will the ogre get his chance to be able to change and find the love of his life with true loves kiss? Now tell me, how can you turn down an offer like this?!?!?
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Nice post, Elena! You did a really great job. You even persuaded me to air your commercial on TV. However, in order to improve your writing, you should try to enhance your writing with transitions and vocabulary. Vocabulary will make you sound more professional. "Transitions will make your essay flow," as Ms.Poynter would say. Overall, I really enjoyed reading your post! haha ReknUggs, (:
ReplyDeleteNice Job Elena! I liked how you had a letter that would make even me put your astonishing commercial on tv. One way to improve is by adding more details about the commercial. All in all, GREAT POST!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat blog post, Elena.I liked how you explained about the movie and why a commercial for it would be great. one way it could improve is if you explained more about why it should air after the three o'clock news. Overall, great blog post!
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