Elena. Elias
Every day, you see people walk by with the same old boring boots. Then you go somewhere else and you see the same type of boots you just saw ten minutes ago. Then you notice that that Boot Company only makes the same type of boots. We would like your news channel to commercialize our product. It is new and is going to be very popular very quickly. If you are tired of the same old boots then I have some news for you because now there are Uggs!!!
Uggs are new and improves boots. They are the most popular women’s sheepskin boot in the whole world. With the fur inside, it is more comfortable than other boots. They are made out of fur to keep you warm and ready for the winter. So now you could avoid layers of socks.
Uggs are also unique. They come in not only basic colors, but they come in neon too!!! When you wear plain old boots, customers have to worry about whether it is going to match their outfit but with Uggs, it will go with anything making it the best boots around. They even come in different styles! For small children, they have swirls, for teenagers you have zippers or buttons, and for adults you have fur outside of the Uggs to make it original. There are even more selections to choose from. And to make it even better, to show our customers how much we appreciate them, for every two purchases, we allow them to design their own Ugg!! It is our new way of giving back to our faithful customers. It will even never be released to the public so you can have the only pair.
These warm stylish boots will get you ready for any type of weather!! In the winter, these genius Uggs will resist rain, water, and snow, so no more worrying about water getting in your shoes. Ugg boots are triple lined with heavy duty fur to ensure they are the best boots around. So people’s feet will be saying “I’m so warm and comfortable,” while your mind will be saying “I love Uggs!” No more worrying about sweaty, stinky feet because with Uggs, the insides are made with climate controlled fur. Costumers don’t have to worry about taking off your shoes and feeling unclean.
Even though these boots are expensive, costumers definitely won’t regret have them because it is real fur and are more comfortable than other boots. Uggs are the next big thing. We project that Ugg scales will sky rocket to over one billion this year. Not only have that costumers looked stylish with Uggs. It’s for a good cause too1 With every purchase, half of your money will go to charity, or will be donated to the people in need, because we all want to make the world a better place.
I would like you to commercialize my product because it is new and it is great for every age. As I said before, Uggs are the new and improves boots, they are unique, they are warm and stylish boots that get you ready for any weather, and even though Uggs are expensive you won’t regret having them. These one of a kind boots will get very popular, very quickly, and if you commercialize our product, not only will it help our company, but it will help you as well.
Nice post,Elena!You did a really nice job on your post. I liked how you explained in detail about your product. If I were in charge of the company, I would definetly air your commercial. If you want to improve your essay, you should try to use vocabulary. Overall, great job!
ReplyDeleteNice Job Elena!! I really enjoyed reading about your product, uggs. I really thought you improved a lot in adding details to your sentences. You can improve for a very insignificant thing and that would be to try to use new words. Most of the time the words new and improved boots were used. Overall, awesome post, I would air your commercial by reading this boardroom proposal, definetly
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